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In Progress Insert Title Here. Fanfic I'm starting to write.(Opinions/Help/Criticism appreciated)
It was why I defined it, because I hate it when arguments crumble to semantics disagreements that distract from the actual conversation. So...well...hey, a resolved argument, who would of thought I can have one of those, aye? ^.^: -
In Progress Insert Title Here. Fanfic I'm starting to write.(Opinions/Help/Criticism appreciated)
I define trope as: A literary device that can be found in multiple stories. And Cambellian mythological archetypes was the foundation of comparative mythology, as in, it study other stories in order to bring it into a distilled form. So he didn't invent the tropes he described, he just... -
In Progress Insert Title Here. Fanfic I'm starting to write.(Opinions/Help/Criticism appreciated)
And played straight almost everything else. -
In Progress Insert Title Here. Fanfic I'm starting to write.(Opinions/Help/Criticism appreciated)
You are absolutely correct, sorry for doing that. Pretty good reasons too, didn't think of that. Sorry. I second this notion. I mean, she managed to pin down everything that was wrong, and then offered awesome advice, without being pedantic (which I have been known to be). I need to learn how... -
In Progress Insert Title Here. Fanfic I'm starting to write.(Opinions/Help/Criticism appreciated)
I said it was a general comment. It was the only fic in this sub-forum recently published that held my interest, so *shrugs*. Yes but the writer wants to write a straight trainer fic, thus you should help them write a better straight trainer fic, because if they start telling the story they... -
In Progress Insert Title Here. Fanfic I'm starting to write.(Opinions/Help/Criticism appreciated)
As a writer, I would like to have had people tell me what exactly I did wrong and what exactly I did right, so I can repeat it. I praised it in a specific manner, Verne did so in a very vague manner without being specific. Being specific helps the writer know what they did right (so they do it... -
In Progress Insert Title Here. Fanfic I'm starting to write.(Opinions/Help/Criticism appreciated)
Hiya. I thought the story was interesting and had a lot of potential, and I wanted to give you some advice beyond tenses and the employment of trainer-fic tropes. I like this opening, because it draws you immediately into a conflict, and its a pretty exciting way to start. No super confusing...